Archive | June, 2011

Copycat: Copy Editing Because No One Else Will

28 Jun
Copycat

Copycat

HAS anyone else looked at articles in the South Asian press and wondered why no one caught all those typos, formatting errors, and just plain bad English that seems to afflict so many of them? Not to mention shoddy reporting and badly written prose. Surely there are copy editors loitering around newspaper offices, with red pencil in hand, just waiting for an incorrect spelling or a dangling clause to put to rights? An editor somewhere who recognizes that sentences must have verbs and to send the writer in question back to the computer to fill in the blanks? How do they sleep at night, these sub-editors/copy-editors, proofreaders and editors, seeing the most basic rules of grammar violated in so many (albeit sometimes imaginative) ways? Somewhere, the souls of Strunk & White are shriveling up in horror that unedited, illiterate reams of newsprint are making their way onto breakfast tables and iPad screens in various parts of the Indian subcontinent. (Or maybe not.)

Since there seems to be a vacancy for a decent editor, I have decided to fill it. Thus, every so often, when I come across something particularly illiterate—or when you, dear reader, send me something you would like to see the way it was meant to be written—I will whip out my red pencil and attempt to cross, correct and craft the offending article into shape. (As one unnamed South Asian author said, “Nerd Heaven!”)

Here’s my first attempt. Just for shock value, take a look at the article as was originally written. Did you sigh in exasperated recognition? Then read on for my edits (additions in caps and sometimes in bold):

Fitness firm sacks rape victim after FIR

NEW DELHI: YESTERDAY/INSERT DATE A 24-year-old woman, who works as a physical trainer AT TKTKTK, has alleged that she was raped twice in the changing room of a gym at the Delhi Development Authority sports complex in Sector 11, Dwarka, first by the manager and then by another trainer.

Both the accused, [[WHO ARE THESE NAMELESS ACCUSED? INSERT NAMES AND AGES HERE]], WHO ARE FROM Meerut, BUT currently LIVE in west Delhi, have been remanded to 14 days’ judicial custody. THEY WERE ARRESTED ON [[INSERT DATE HERE]].

Shockingly, the victim WAS FIRED by [[INSERT NAME OF HER EMPLOYER HERE]], the private fitness training company WHERE SHE WORKS, after the incidents [[OR THE POLICE COMPLAINT?]], along with the accused, [[WHO ALSO WORKED THERE?]].

GET QUOTE FROM THE COMPANY HERE ABOUT WHY THEY FIRED THE VICTIM AND THE ACCUSED. GET QUOTES FROM THE VICTIM’S FAMILY IF POSSIBLE.

ALSO GET A QUOTE FROM THE DELHI DEVELOPMENT AUTHORITY ON THE SAFETY OF THEIR SPORTS COMPLEXES AND FROM A GYM MEMBER WHO USES THAT PARTICULAR COMPLEX, AND PERHAPS A FELLOW TRAINER, ON WHETHER OR NOT THEY FEEL SAFE WORKING OUT THERE.

The woman, a resident of Mangolpuri [[IN TIMBUKTU? OR A NEIGHBOURHOOD OF DELHI?]], is separated from her husband and has filed for divorce [[HOW ARE THESE DETAILS RELEVANT? THEY IMPLY THAT HER MARITAL STATUS HAS SOMETHING TO DO WITH HER ASSAULTS. CUT]]. Sources [[WHO ARE THESE MYSTERIOUS SOURCES? GIVE US SOME NAMES PLEASE]] claimed she landed [[USE ANOTHER WORD—TOO COLLOQUIAL]] the job through a friend, another gym trainer AT [[INSERT NAME OF EMPLOYER HERE]] who was a friend of Ajay [[INSERT LAST NAME HERE]], one of the accused.

The police [[WHO FROM THE POLICE? USE THE PERSON’S NAME HERE AND INCLUDE HIS OR HER JOB TITLE AND RANK]] said the woman was transferred from the Paschim Vihar branch of the fitness centre TO THE DWARKA BRANCH on June 15 to undergo training as an instructor, [[BECAUSE….?]]. According to THE POLICE complaint SHE FILED, ON JUNE 19, Ajay [[INSERT LAST NAME HERE]], A TRAINER AT THE PASCHIM VIHAR SPORTS COMPLEX, approached her around 11 am on June 19 with a white powder after she had complained of a headache. [[ADD DETAILS—WHAT DID AJAY SAY THE WHITE POWDER WAS?]] The victim reportedly felt dizzy after having the powder [[IN A GLASS OF WATER? INHALING IT LIKE COCAINE?]] and went to THE changing room [[WAS IT A WOMEN’S CHANGING ROOM? A UNISEX ONE? WAS IT EMPTY?]] to sit DOWN. The accused followed her there and raped her. [[DID SHE SCREAM? WHY DID NO ONE HEAR HER? IF THE ASSAULT TOOK PLACE IN THE MORNING, SURELY THERE WAS SOMEONE AROUND WHO WOULD HAVE HEARD. CANVAS THE GYM TO SEE IF THERE WERE ANY OTHER STAFFERS OR GYM MEMBERS AROUND; PERHAPS A JANITOR HEARD? AND THEN WHEN DID THE MANAGER OF THE COMPLEX RAPE HER? HOW IS HE INVOLVED? HOW DID SHE LEAVE AFTER THE ASSAULT OR ASSAULTS? WAS SHE THREATENED TO KEEP QUIET OR WAS SHE ALLOWED TO LEAVE?]]

“The victim said out of fear she did not tell anyone about the attack,” claimed one of her acquaintances [[WHO IS THIS ACQUAINTANCE? WHAT WAS SHE SCARED OF? AND THEN WHAT PROMPTED HER TO COME FORWARD AND FILE A COMPLAINT? DID SOMETHING HAPPEN TO MAKE HER STOP BEING AFRAID?]].

According to the complaint, the victim’s mother was threatened by the accused and her boyfriend beaten up when they came to the DDA complex [[THESE DETAILS NEED MORE EXPLANATION—WHEN DID THEY COME TO THE SPORTS COMPLEX? DID SHE ASK THEM TO FETCH HER AFTER SHE WAS ATTACKED? IS THIS ON JUNE 19 OR ANOTHER DATE? WHO THREATENED THE MOTHER? WHO BEAT UP THE BOYFRIEND? WHAT ARE THE NAMES OF THE MOTHER AND BOYFRIEND? TRY TO GET A QUOTE FROM THEM]]. The boyfriend was taken to Deen Dayal Upadhyay Hospital [[THE CLOSEST HOSPITAL, PERHAPS?)]] for treatment [[FOR WHAT? A SPLIT LIP? SOMETHING MORE SERIOUS?]] after which an FIR [[A FIRST INFORMATION REPORT]] was registered [[BY THE BOYFRIEND? PLEASE DON’T LEAVE US IN SUSPENSE!]].

“After getting the medical report of the victim, the police filed an FIR of rape against the duo and they were arrested,” said the police official [[WHICH POLICE OFFICIAL? NAME, JOB TITLE AND RANK HERE PLEASE]].

According to the DDA officials, the contract for maintaining and running the gym had been awarded to Himanshu Bhardwaj, director of SAB fitness and training centre [[THIS INFORMATION NEEDS TO COME HIGHER UP. ALSO WE NEED MORE INFORMATION ABOUT SAB FITNESS—FOR INSTANCE, ON THEIR WEBSITE THEY ADVERTISE THEIR SERVICES TO RUN GYMS OWNED BY OTHERS. HOW MANY SUCH ARRANGEMENTS DO THEY HAVE? WHO’S LIABLE IF SOMETHING HAPPENS AT ONE OF THESE LOCATIONS? HAVE THEY EVER FACED COMPLAINTS BEFORE OF INAPPROPRIATE BEHAVIOUR? WHAT KIND OF SCREENING PROCESS DO PHYSICAL TRAINERS GO THROUGH BEFORE THEY ARE HIRED? HOW MANY TRAINERS DO THEY HIRE? WHAT’S THE RATIO OF MEN TO WOMEN? ETC]]. The accused and the victim were employees of this fitness center.

“I don’t know if these allegations are true but the contradictory statements given by the woman indicate that the trainer is being framed. I don’t want to comment further as the matter is under investigation,” Bhardwaj said. [[DON’T LET HIM GET AWAY WITH A STATEMENT LIKE THAT—WHAT ARE THE “CONTRADICTORY STATEMENTS”? I DON’T SEE ANY CONTRADICTORY STATEMENTS SO FAR—ONLY INCOMPLETE ONES. WHY WOULD THE TRAINER BE FRAMED? ALSO, YOU GET THIS QUOTE FROM HIM WHICH EXPRESSES HIS DISBELIEF THAT HIS TRAINER’S ACCUSATIONS ARE FALSE, BUT DON’T QUESTION HIM ON WHY SHE WAS FIRED?]]

He said the victim HAS BEEN EMPLOYED for the past six months, while the accused were working for him for around a year.

NOTES: THE ONLY QUOTES IN THIS STORY ARE FROM AN UNNAMED POLICE OFFICIAL, AN UNNAMED SOURCE WHO COMMENTS ON THE VICTIM’S STATE OF MIND, AND THE EMPLOYER WHO FIRED THE VICTIM AND THE ACCUSED. NO QUOTES FROM THE VICTIM OR SOMEONE FROM THE VICTIM’S FAMILY, NO IDENTIFIED FRIENDS OR FAMILY, NO QUOTES FROM A WOMEN’S ORGANIZATION/RAPE SHELTER, OR A LAWYER, OR A UNION REP, ON WHETHER HER FIRING WAS EVEN CONSTITUTIONAL.


No offense to the writers and editors at the fine publication where this article originally appeared—my aim with the Copycat post (this is the first one but hopefully there will be more to come) is to make a virtual contribution to journalism in the region where I first learned to write and edit, not to single out any particular person or paper.

And if you come across any articles that are begging for the Copycat treatment, do send them my way via the comments section below or through the Contact form.

Four on Friday: The India Files

24 Jun

FOUR tidbits from the homeland this week.

1. Coke Studio has come to India! For those of you new to Coke Studio, it began in Pakistan four years ago, as a television show sponsored by Coca-Cola featuring live music and collaborations between Pakistani folk, eastern, classical, and contemporary musicians. It has become a runaway hit, and there is nothing quite like it in the region.

From the melodies in Pashto and Dari to the pop compositions of Strings and Ali Zafar, from the sweet voices of Zeb and Haniya to the gravelly Garaj Baras rendition by Ali Azmat and Rahat Fateh Ali Khan and the irresistibly foot-tapping Chambey di Booti (Jugni) by Arif Lohar and Meesha Shafi, Coke Studio Pakistan enchants and delights. It doesn’t matter that you don’t know what the lyrics mean or what that instrument is called, it draws you in and doesn’t let you go.

Noori in Coke Studio Pakistan

Noori in Coke Studio Pakistan

In a behind-the-scenes Newsline interview, Coke Studio Pakistan’s producer, Rohail Hyatt talks about the show’s beginnings and what he hopes to achieve with it. Hyatt laments the fading out of traditional music and said he hopes the music show will provide a new platform for dying musical languages. He adds that Coke Studio isn’t “a commercial platform, it’s become commercial because people have liked it, but it was never meant to be. We have never succumbed to the pressures like, ‘Oh God, there are so many fans now that we have to cater to the public taste.’ In fact, it’s even more experimental this time.”

Asked about Coca-Cola taking the show to India, Hyatt is hopeful. “From what I am seeing and hearing, India is also trying to reinvent itself. Trying to totally steer away from Bollywood. Just look at the palette they have in terms of raw talent. Music is part of their philosophy. With a palette like that, you could paint a very interesting picture.”

It’s true that Indian radio stations play Bollywood beats obsessively, and it’s only in recent years that non-movie songs by Rabbi Shergill, Kailash Kher and others have made it to FM. As composer-singer Shankar Mahadevan—who featured in the first episode—told NDTV, “Bollywood is huge, I admit, but isn’t our country huge too?”

As someone who only discovered Coke Studio earlier this year, I didn’t have quite as long to wait for Coca-Cola to bring their venture to India. Perhaps that’s why I don’t share the skepticism of long-time fans when Coke Studio India, officially known as Coke Studio@MTV, debuted in India last Friday at 7 p.m. on the popular music channel. The blog Kafila pronounced, “The unanimous verdict is that Coke Studio India (first aired on the Friday that went by) is no match for Coke Studio Pakistan.”

But Coke Studio Pakistan is mature, and in its fourth season, having produced more than 80 songs; Coke Studio@MTV is six tunes old—an infant in comparison. It’s true, the Indian show could lose the flashing strobe lights and nightclub-like atmosphere, and there’s a lot out there apart from drums and catchy beats, but I for one enjoyed the debut and am looking forward to more. (Watch the first six episodes here.)

The second show is tonight. I, for one, am holding back on the criticism and am cheering with all my might. As much as MTV channel head Aditya Swamy says, “We are not at all worried about TRPs. All we want is to promote pure music [and] youngsters to enjoy the sound of various regions of India,” I am in no hurry to lose a genuine attempt to foster dialogue between India’s diverse musicians to low ratings and an indifferent audience.

Upma as prepared by Top Chef winner Floyd Cardoz

Upma as prepared by Top Chef winner Floyd Cardoz

2. Speaking of success stories, I was buoyed to learn of Indian chef Floyd Cardoz taking home the top prize in the 2011 season of the reality show Top Chef Masters. Top Chef—my favorite cooking show—is a competition among chefs featuring unusual challenges. Past episodes have featured cook-outs on the beach, with the chefs catching the seafood they will serve; cooking with no utensils; cooking with whatever ingredients are on board a ferry; cooking meals reminiscent of their childhoods; cooking healthy versions of the favorite meals of contestants on The Biggest Loser, a weight-loss reality show; creating their own restaurants; and more.

Fellow Mumbaikar Floyd Cardoz won for his preparation of the South Indian upma (as part of a three-course meal that also included a rice-crusted snapper in fennel-laced broth and a reinterpreted version of a beef stew called rendang). Not my first choice at an Udipi restaurant, but still so exciting! Cardoz’s $100,000 grand prize will be donated to the Young Scientist Cancer Research Fund in memory of his father, who died of cancer. After his win, Cardoz tweeted, “Woke up with a hangover. that’s what a magnum of Dom does to you when you celebrate a #TopChefMasters win. I welcome this headache anytime.”

Cardoz, recently of the Indo-French restaurant Tabla, which shut its doors last December, is the new chef of the forthcoming Danny Meyer seafood restaurant in Battery Park, North End Grill. Am looking forward to trying it out!

Meanwhile, here’s his recipe for upma if Top Chef inspired you to give it a try:

Wild Mushroom Upma Polenta with Kokum & Coconut Milk

Four servings

Ingredients

2 cups cream of wheat
3 tablespoons canola oil
1 teaspoon mustard seeds
1 teaspoon cumin
4 tablespoons butter
2 tablespoons shallots
1 tablespoon ginger
1 tablespoon chillies
3 cups chicken stock
3 cups coconut milk
Salt and pepper, to taste
Cilantro, as garnish
Pea shoots, as garnish
Mushrooms
3 tablespoons canola oil
1/2 cup oyster mushrooms
1/2 cup Maitake
1/2 cup king oyster mushrooms
2 shallots
1 chilli pepper
1 knob ginger
Salt and pepper, to taste
2 tablespoons butter
1/4 cup white port
1 tablespoons cilantro, chopped

Directions
1. Heat oil and cream of wheat and toast for 10 minutes on low heat. Remove from pan
2. Heat oil mixture then add mustard seeds and whisk until seeds pop. Add cumin and reserve
3. Heat pan. Add spice oil and butter. Add shallots, ginger, chillies, and cook for 2-4 minutes. Add cream of wheat and cook for 3-4 minutes. Add stock and coconut milk. Mix and cook. Simmer
4. Should be smooth.

Directions for mushrooms
1. Heat oil in sauté pan. Add mushrooms and cook with lightly coloured sear
2. Add butter, shallots, ginger and chilli
3. Deglaze with white port
4. Season with salt and pepper and cilantro.

3. You’ve probably heard of “coyotes” who bring Mexican undocumented immigrants across the border to the United States for hefty sums; in India, the coyotes are called “linemen” and they’re not much different. So says Scott Carney in the new issue of Foreign Policy, in his excellent story, “Fortress India.” In it, Carney describes a “Berlin Wall” that is being constructed by India on its border with Bangladesh, to keep its northern neighbors out. The wall has been in existence since the late 1980s, and is close to completion—the final section will be completed in 2012.

Shockingly—or perhaps, not so shockingly—the Indian Border Security Force guarding the wall has notched up nearly 1,000 killings since 2000, roughly two per week. Carney writes:

In India, the 25-year-old border fence — finally expected to be completed next year at a cost of $1.2 billion — is celebrated as a panacea for a whole range of national neuroses: Islamist terrorism, illegal immigrants stealing Indian jobs, the refugee crisis that could ensue should a climate catastrophe ravage South Asia. But for Bangladeshis, the fence has come to embody the irrational fears of a neighbor that is jealously guarding its newfound wealth even as their own country remains mired in poverty. The barrier is a physical reminder of just how much has come between two once-friendly countries with a common history and culture — and how much blood one side is willing to shed to keep them apart.

And with climate change wreaking havoc on ecologically sensitive Bangladesh, things are expected to get a lot worse.

Situated on a delta and crisscrossed by 54 swollen rivers, Bangladesh factors prominently in nearly every worst-case climate-change scenario. The 1-meter sea-level rise predicted by some widely used scientific models would submerge almost 20 percent of the country. The slow creep of seawater into Bangladesh’s rivers caused by global-warming-induced flooding, upriver dams in India, and reduced glacial melt from the Himalayas is already turning much of the country’s fertile land into saline desert, upending its precarious agricultural economy. Studies commissioned by the U.S. Defense Department and almost a dozen other security agencies warn that if Bangladesh is hit by the kind of Hurricane Katrina-grade storm that climate change is likely to make more frequent, it would be a “threat multiplier,” sending ripples of instability across the globe: new opportunities for terrorist networks, conflicts over basic human essentials like access to food and water, and of course millions of refugees. And it’s no secret where the uprooted Bangladeshis would go first. Bangladesh shares a border with only two countries: the democratic republic of India and the military dictatorship of Burma. Which would you choose?

The migrants will continue to come, and many will die—unnecessarily—at the hands of trigger-happy soldiers. Since liberalization of its economy in the 1990s, India has been keen to imitate the United States’ worst habits: McDonald’s; privatization to the detriment of the population; the workings of its newspaper industry, now foundering badly. In this, too, the U.S. example has not been a successful one. Criminalizing immigrants, erecting fences, xenophobic attitudes: none of this has worked. It’s time to find another path.

The Beautiful and the Damned by Siddhartha Deb

The Beautiful and the Damned by Siddhartha Deb

4. Finally, we are seeing India’s new Internet laws in motion, in the recent lawsuit for “grave harassment and injury” that businessman and Bollywood dabbler Arindam Chaudhuri has launched against journalist Siddhartha Deb, the publishers of The Caravan, which published Deb’s profile of Chaudhuri, Penguin, which is publishing Deb’s forthcoming book, The Beautiful and the Damned, of which the Chaudhuri chapter forms a part, and, bizarrely, Google India.

Check out my previous post about the broad, vaguely worded and regressive new law. I hope to write more on this issue later, so I will keep it short here. Please do read Deb’s profile of Chaudhuri: it’s exceedingly well-written, incisive and even-handed (apologies for the formatting; The Caravan was forced to remove the article from their website by the Assam court, where the suit was filed), and Chaudhuri’s fulminating rebuttal—where he praises the new Internet rules, and which was published in a magazine that he owns—here. The Caravan promises to keep readers updated on the progress of the case. In their editorial on the issue, they say that they intend to “fight this suit because we believe that we must defend the right of journalists to report on controversial subjects or persons without undue fear of legal intimidation from powerful entities or organisations that seek to insulate themselves from criticism.” Amen.

Cirque-tacular at the Oval

19 Jun

TODAY, while we were watching the free Cirque-tacular spectacle at the Oval, I almost wished I were a kid again. What more could a child ask for? A lawn, lots of playgrounds nearby, building friends, and free stuff in the summer catered to my age group! Like the group of talented contortionists, bull-whip masters, jugglers, clowns, dancers and aerialists who performed at Peter Cooper Village and Stuy Town’s central grassy lawn, the Oval, this evening. I clapped my hands as excitedly as the toddlers crowding the railing.

The contortionist in Act Two

The contortionist in Act Two

The juggler

The juggler

The funny cowboy with the bull whip and the lasso

The funny cowboy with the bull whip and the lasso

This rope was 40 feet long

This rope was 40 feet long

The colorful clown duo

The colorful clown duo

The amazingly talented dancer

The amazingly talented dancer

The graceful and gravity-defying aerialist

The graceful and gravity-defying aerialist

Four on Friday: Cozumel Eats

17 Jun

SINCE this seems to be Cozumel Week on this blog (seriously, Mexico travel and tourism ministry, you think I’m going to get my commission anytime soon?) I am continuing the trend with four great places to eat in Cozumel.

1. Casa Denis: This one tops my list coz it stands the test of time. It was, hand’s down, my best meal during a week of delicious meals in Chichén Itzá, Cozumel and Tulum, and it was my best meal this time around, too. It’s the oldest restaurant on the island (or so they claim) and has old black and white photos displayed on the inside wall. The seating is mainly outdoors; sit on the side of the main square rather than the stuffier back. The servers are jovial, the margaritas huge, and the fresh watermelon juice pure heaven. But the reason you should go there is the food. The fish, like everywhere on the island, is fresh as can be; the preparation, divine. I had red snapper (last time it was grouper) rubbed with lime, garlic, and salt. I can’t think of a simpler seasoning but combined, it made magic in my mouth. I asked our server for the recipe, and this is what he said:

Delicious margarita at Casa Denis

Delicious margarita at Casa Denis

To prepare the garlic, cut it into fine pieces and toss it in olive oil with lime, white wine and jugo de Maggi (Maggi sauce, that you can buy in Cozumel). Once the garlic is ready, marinate the fish with lime, salt, pepper and garlic, and then grill or cook in a pan.

We brought a travel-sized bottle of the Maggie jugo back with us, and I can’t wait to try making the dish myself. But I know it won’t touch what we had at Casa Denis, and I can’t imagine it’ll be too long before we’ll be back there to have the real thing!

132 Calle 1. #987-872-0067

2. Tio José: This little place, which is called “Uncle José” is a humble eatery right by the water, close to the lighthouse. You can get a seat outside on the terrace or on the beach itself. I highly recommend the fish tacos (super simple, with tomatoes and lettuce and pickled onions—oh, those onions! I could write odes to those onions) and the pork tacos and the micheladas—beer mixed with lime, hot sauce, and salt. Best eaten with the sea breeze lightly ruffling your hair. And after you’re done, you can pull on your flippers and snorkel mask and wade into the water, as a number of families were doing when we were there.

One half block east of the intersection of Avenida 65 and Calle 11 on the south side of the street.

Fish tacos at Tio Jose

Fish tacos at Tio Jose

3. Chen Rio: This seaside shack on the eastern side of the island was recommended to us by a local for its excellent seafood. Accessible only through the lone paved road that connects the tourist-stuffed western side—bulging with cruise liners, “flea markets” and high-end jewelery stores—to the calmer, deserted eastern side, Chen Rio was still surprisingly crowded, a testament to how far folks are willing to drive for fresh lobster. If you’re in a group of four, you can get the seafood platter, with fish, shrimp, lobster and conch. Being only two of us, we settled for the shrimp and lobster platter, which was more than enough. There were no fancy sauces or delicate arrangements, just fresh white meat on lettuce and tomato, with a side of fries and four slices of avocado. They provide plenty of salt and wedges of lime; sprinkle liberally and dig in!

The Chen Rio seaside shack

The Chen Rio seaside shack

Our partially devoured lobster and shrimp platter at Chen Rio

Our partially devoured lobster and shrimp platter at Chen Rio

After we were done eating, we queried our waiter about the provenance of the lobster. In answer, he pointed at a fishing boat that was just coming to shore. Off the boat and onto the plates! It doesn’t get any fresher than that.

The other awesome thing about Chen Rio is that, like Tio José, the beach it sits on is perfect for snorkeling or swimming. It’s protected by a ring of rocks that take the ferocity of the waves, leaving the enclosed space gentle and welcoming. To the left is a natural kiddie pool, a high bar of sand that creates a shallow pool, only two or three feet deep, where the tots can splash about in safety.

Costera Este Highway 3.5 miles, north Cozumel 77600.
The back garden at Kinta

The back garden at Kinta

4. Kinta: This is where you want to go for date night in Cozumel. Ask to be seated in the back garden. Artfully placed fronds shield you from your fellow diners; lights shine through stenciled out iguana sculptures clinging to the walls; and the red-and-black color scheme is just plain romantic. They have variations on the standard margarita—hibiscus or jasmine, anyone?—and an innovative, oft-changing menu. It seems to change so often, in fact, that I can’t find the appetizer that I devoured a mere week ago on their website! It was so good that I recommend asking for it by name if it’s not on the current rotation. It’s called the cherry bomb, and it’s four perfectly round balls of fried conch and other stuff that set off fireworks in my mouth. You look at the artful presentation, the mélange of flavors, the bringing together of the familiar and the surprising, and you know that there’s a real chef behind every dish. I won’t recommend other specific dishes, but if you want delicious food in a beautiful setting, you must pay a visit to Kinta.

Av. 5 between Calles 2 and 4, Cozumel, Quintana Roo, 77600. #987-869-0544

Sleeping with the Fishes

14 Jun

OK, I admit it, that title was a bit of a tease. This post has nothing to do with either The Godfather or death, but it does have to do with marine life. These are videos of sea critters that I took while snorkeling in Cozumel, off the Yucatan coast of Mexico, this past weekend. Excuse the shakiness; the waves made it difficult to hold the camera steady.

In this first video, a grouper (in the background) and an unknown blue fish swim past. Taken while snorkeling off the western coast of Cozumel, just opposite the restaurant Paprika.

In this second video, there are too many fish in this video to describe them all, but the school of purple looking fish floating around are actually yellow grunt fish; the absorption of light in the water does funny things to color. The tiny black and yellow striped fish are sergeant majors, and the spiny black creature hiding out in the coral is a black sea urchin.

Several Blue Tang.

I don’t know what fish these are but they surrounded me as I was about to leave the water and I had to take a quick video of them. I tried to reach out and touch them but they always managed to change direction at the last second and evade me.